Great message in the end. Loved the thoughts you have put in this one. Great write friend

all the best and take care

Nice work xx

Oh this piece deeply touched and moved me, so much pain and sadness expressed Then finding hope and belief to keep going

"But as I stand here I realize
There are many years to come
Many people to meet and help
A positive reason to live
Live I will succeed I hope"

Beautiful piece, so much you have touched upon, what bravery...
Not just that but you gave it a tender blowing flow which eased such a rhythm beating from your heart..5/5 Aaron

Life on d edge.. is a nice n neat poem..

Loved it.. Keep it up,

best wishz.... Karan