Thats very good, well done keep going xx

Aww this is so sad and cute at the same time, i love it, its filled with such strong emotion, lovely job

ps. grampa is spelled grandpa

This is so sad..
and it's written very well..

one thing though - in the fifth stanza I think you mean angel not angle.

and like someone said above, it would have a better flow and look better if you changed the stanza with three lines into four.

very nice work, though.
well done.

So so wonderful!!! A lovely innocent piece!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-