That last stanza made my throat dry. soo good!

A very pathetic poem reminding me the lines of T.S.Eliot's Waste Land where the travellers are longing for water and right direction but they do not get support.If we want to win we have to survive ourselves.good poem

A very pathetic poem reminding me the lines of T.S.Eliot's Waste Land where the travellers are longing for water and right direction but they do not get support.If we want to win we have to survive ourselves.good poem

Itz a sad poem.... keep writing,

Best wishz,