Comments : Not even a single chance

  • 17 years ago

    by krissa

    Pls. rate and comment my poem..
    thx..

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Really really good poem!
    good use of words too :)
    5 from me :)!

  • 17 years ago

    by Arnold

    Ganda naman. bigo sa pag-ibig? hehehehe. tau lang ata taga phils dito ha? hehehe.. nice kept in touch

  • 17 years ago

    by withlove

    I really like it
    i just think it might flow better if the fourth stanza follows the same pattern as the first 3?i dunno maybe that compromises the feeling you were going for
    just a suggestion
    good job 4/5