A very deep poem, sad but very well written. Like the way it flows and your choice of words. Your emotions are well potrayed here. Nice piece keep up

This is good well done xx

This is an absolutely brilliant piece of poetry that nearly tore my heart to shreds 5/5 the emotion was evident, the words and rhyme were perfect, the whole poem flowed so well

Keep Writing, lovely
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~