Very good poem, deep emotions well done xx

Girl , in poetry , we dont make 1 block 1 paragraph poem , it si bad for the eyes, make the eye run from reading and tired, break it up to patrts,
and make it rhyming it is a great peace if you work on it , more ,

Very well done. Truth in everything you've wrote, loved it. 5/5. Em

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