Comments : Betrayed on the path of fire

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Again... beautifully written...

    lots of emotion... very touching...
    the last line is simply beautiful...

    great write..

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Nicely written again..

    keep writing..

    best wishz... karan

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Great writing, keep going xx