Comments : Someone Else

  • 16 years ago

    by Ryley B

    I love the part i want to be the vrsion of my self wow your good, please keep writing

  • 15 years ago

    by claire

    But I don't wanna be like them
    I just wanna be a better version of myself
    Someone who can finally be happy and not worry about the thoughts or opinions of anybody else
    I look around and constantly question what I see
    But I just wanna be...me

    seriously this is great - i want to put that on my wall or something! i can relate to the whole thing -except having been suicidal, but w/e - and i love it. keep writing!

  • 15 years ago

    by shantavia

    Um the title goes a little me personaly but its an ok poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    This is really good , good job . 5/5 . X

  • 15 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Wow, honey, that was amazing. I can relate:)

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