Its nice and soO deep , i like it .

but this part its would be better if you just mixed with a rhyme like :

Marggrett you are my sweetheart.
You are everything to me , you are my part
And I know you feel the same way.
thats what making me love and next to you stay

thnx , but its realy nice , keep going , let me read your poems again and again :)

I can feel what u were goin through..and am really sorry fr that...
And about the poem,I do admire ur direct way,I think this is easy to get through the heart...so keep it up and keep smilin:)...