Wow i wasn't expecting that......... it was a really great peom........ all i can say i

i give it a 5/5

Wow. First of all, this was a beautifully written. Absolutely beautiful.

I do not dislike much about the poem, just a few minor things that should be fixed..

"A reason to live In a lifeless hell
Red black soul she didn't want to sell
For such a low price she deserves much more
Years far past but the blood stained her floor"

^^ "In" doesn't need to be capitalized. Though, that doesn't take away from the fact that I think it's wondeful.

"Revenge takes her place while she starts to survive
Turn the beauty of death and bleed her alive
Heal the angel and she'll heal you too
Shelll finally find god and know what to do"

^^ "Shelll" --> I get the feeling this should be "She'll".

There are a few other thigns I could point out, but it's just comma placements and things of that nature.

"Limbless bird feel my wrath
Feel the flood of a bloodbath
Gluttony among the dead
Feeding on my life and all my pride
Greed take all from fallen angel for a stride"

^^ I LOVE LOVE LOVE this stanza! The fast that there is 5 lines, rather than just four, makes it stand out, and it grabs attention.

Overall, I enjoyed this poem. It's worded perfectly and has the kind of effect on me that made it so hard to stop reading, that there is no way I could, even if it went on forever. Great job.

5/5

-Briana