Damn.
I suck.
I didn't get the ending at all.

I do like this poem.
It tries to explain life.

It has your own personality at the ending.
It's... well, I don't know.
I WAS going to say cute.
But I dont' think you want that in a poem.

Hey i really loved the starting...

Running

You can only do it for so long
before you have to stop.
Be it from exhaustion,
or simply giving up

^^the first stanza has such a deep meaning to it... i liked it...

the other stanzas also explain so much about life... it depends onperson toperson.. how one leads his life... I really liked the concept...

excellent write..