OMG! this was great! really it was so good. It was so sad too. The effort you put into this came back ten fold. You really put your soul into this one didn't you? I can tell.

Ive never felt so lonely
but still i live to please
pushing my pain aside, to help
puts my heart at ease

^^^I LOVED this line. it was so frickin good. I could put myself in your position the way u described every emotion you were feeling. Though it was a poem of pain, reading it was plessurable. the flow makes it stick in your mind. way to go. keep it up! 5/5
your friend,
~Forever Broken~

Love it!!! i love you!!! lol