Its half sad half happy full of requests and want I like it though.

It's like a prayer in a way. Your begging to leave the life of pain you've come to know and praying to stay side by side with your love. Really filled with emotion.

Lay me down next to you side by side
to the one i have come to know so well
the one i have fallen in love with
the one i care about so much
who means everything to me

^^^This stanza was perticularly good. it shows what you see as an escape. Nice touch. Keep it up girl!
your friend,
~Forever Broken~

This is an awesome poem
maybe i can write a reply to it wadda u think