hey thank ;) it's nice to know someone feels the same

Thanks again cupcake, now i just need the courage to show the people i know... hehe

this is the second poem of your i have read and i love them both, your agood poet keep it up, i'll be back to read and comment more. and thanks for the wonderful comment you made on mine! write forever PLP

~lil slam~

I can see why it is a finalist in a poetry contest. Good luck! Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

A couple of little typos but overall excellent poem, check out some of mine :)

I really like this one. Very good rhyming scheme and it all goes well together. Great job! >3jess

I love the flow and the words.. Nicely done... 5/5 none to less.. take care (always)) xx:

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wow, that ws great. keep up the good work!!!

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Perfect... 5/5 Love it