Very beautiful poem. i thought it was simple and very affective. great explaination of how the sky changed and how your feelings about love did too. you incorperated love and nature all together in a unquie and beautiful way.

from warm heat
and love's sweet bliss
to dark clouds
of hateful abyss

a beautiful and affective stanza. it really caught my eye. even though so simple i think it made the poem beautiful. great job-----tara