A really good piece, I thought. Strong message, words and even rhymes. There's nothing I can see that I didn't like.

Brad

Beautiful and It flowed so nicely....

You are a very wise man and speak such truth that utterly leaves me speechless. Another strong poem backed with a powerful message. Well done in creating this piece *5/5*

I like how your poems are short, but they have alot of meaning and truth to them.