Comments : Glances

  • 16 years ago

    by benjamin

    I like it. love the rhymes. though i think you could make it sound more powerful if you had something that rhymed at the end like
    "because you're more then just a crush"
    your the one who gives me a rush..
    see how it like catches the attention and what this guy means to you.. thats my opinion .. just a suggestion... wonderful poem though