Good. Short.
This poem leaves you hanging in my point of view but other that i really like it. And you can get rid of the.... i�i�i�
just edit it.

I want you
I so badly want you
But i�m trying to stay collected,
But it�s hard
You make it hard
And we both know that i�m affected.
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this was my favorite stanza it describes so much in just a few lines