Comments : Made For Each Other

  • 15 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I deeply enjoyed in this piece, it is truly beautiful and greatly written from the beginning to the end.

    I have just two critics: You should change every '&' with 'and', it would look nicer and in the last line "that be forever" is not used with correct tense. It should be "that'll be forever".

    Overall, this is enjoyable read, a poetic gem filled with heartfelt emotions that flow through every stanza. I like the flow and rhythm that you created through the whole poem.

    The first and the second stanza are my favorite, they pulled me deeply into this poem and every word there seem perfectly picked.

    Great job :)
    Keep up,
    5/5 from me

  • 15 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Really nice write n totally agree wth Nyell abt 1 and 2 stanzas are beautiful.

    All the very best.
    Good job
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    I liked ur poem alot it was very sweet. u did great filling it with all ur mixed emotions.. nice job! 5/5 always
    Kate~

  • 15 years ago

    by darkest4ever

    Pretty great poem ...

  • 15 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This was very beautiful and touching. Amazing how our emotions overtake us sometimes. But then again, of course, because Dil to Pagal hai!

  • 15 years ago

    by Marwa

    Keep it up hunz really gud poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Although it is meaningful, it seems more like a letter than a poem. Not something deserving of the front page. Nice try though.

  • 15 years ago

    by shamvi

    I like this..loads 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by unicorn

    I like your poem i feel as if it was composed especially for me...