First off...love the title! Then you lead right in to the rainbow reference...beautiful! The flow and rhyming is great....only loses it a bit in the last verse....

"Cast those demons from your head,
Learn to love once more,
Not just others, but yourself,
Like you did before."

^ I really like these lines...when life deals those hard blows...and we feel like we can never get up.....draw upon that inner strength to persevere! Sometimes self love is the most difficult of all...and the person we are the most hard on is within...

All in all a very well structured read...with a nice message! Well done....5/5

Ireally enjoyed this poem, it's a beautiful ead
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Excellent job, i will vote for this poem and give it a 5/5
Great work

Congrats on the win! Well deserved....I knew it was a winner!

That was amazing! i loved every bit of it!

Awwwww, that's soooo sweeet.. well written and all... *thumbs up*

Cast those demons from your head,
Learn to love once more,
Not just others, but yourself,
Like you did before.
^^^
I love this stanza .... To love oneself is the beginning step. Without self love, we are only a walking shell

Many falter, many fail,
So many are misled,
Pain exists in every life,
If human, you have bled.
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So very true!

Only you can make the choice,
To see this journey out,
Joy and laughter play a part,
But so does hurt and doubt.
^^^
In the journey of life there are many obstacles, ups and downs .... only we can decide how we handle them and which road to take.

I loved the chosen title ... very unique and eye catching!

Congrats on your win .... wonderful read you've penned.
Luanne

Beautiful..

Very well done.
This reminds me of what I was trying to tell someone that was very close to me.
Some how I didn't know how to say the right words, but you did it.
Greatjob. I give this a 5/5. =]

First off, congratulations on the win :)

The title is captivating, it make me wonder where the poem will go. I like the topic and whole concept of this piece, it holds some truly profound and amazing lines. This piece posses truly captivating positivity, especially in the end, and it is inspiring and heartfelt.

- Pain exists in every life,
If human, you have bled.-
^^^
I love these lines, they seem simple yet they hold true, deep meaning. Powerful.

Also, I like the flow that you created from the beginning to the end. It is natural and serene.

Keep up!

Simply awesome.

Many falter, many fail,
So many are misled,
Pain exists in every life,
If human, you have bled.

Love that verse.
Once again simply awesome!

Beautiful poem ...loved it

Nice job

This is gorgeously written, I can see why it was a winner. I truly appreciate the comment you gave me on my poem, and would hope to get much more feedback on my work from a poet as skilled as you

I read this poem 9 years ago... when I was too scared to make an account and share my writing. I have a copy of it on the front of my notebook because it has so inspired me, and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing, and inspiring me to do the same. Maybe someone will read words that I have written and find the same strength I have found reading yours.
-Tony

I read this poem 9 years ago... when I was too scared to make an account and share my writing. I have a copy of it on the front of my notebook because it has so inspired me, and I just wanted to say thank you for sharing, and inspiring me to do the same. Maybe someone will read words that I have written and find the same strength I have found reading yours.
-Tony

The rhythem was fast. Almost like chanting to me. The first stanza was so amazing it sets the pace so well i had to go back and reread.