The beginning of this poem didn't exactly capture me. I'm not sure why, but there wasn't much to draw me in. But as I continued reading, I finally started to enjoy the poem.
Your metaphor of love being like a photograph was truely amazing. Though I've heard it before, you explained it in a more joyous way, or in a way that wasn't so heart-breaking, and I liked that.
Good punctuation, though I don't usually like the "..." thing in poems, I did like it in this, I thought it went well, and the fact that it was repeated didn't show it as being out of place.
Good job!
5/5

~Lace

I really enjoyed this poem, the whole idea of it was amazing. i really liked the beginning of the poem. Great work.

I really enjoyed this poem, the whole idea of it was amazing. i really liked the beginning of the poem. Great work.

The flow was perfect....you knew what words to put where and it went together well...great write....^_^

Life is 99% worth living because it has 1% love in it n Its the 1% that makes life 100 percent...

he best photograph I ever saw, read n understood n tatz ur 1% in this poem my fren... Fantastic...

Keep it up..

best wishz... karan

Life is 99% worth living because it has 1% love in it n Its the 1% that makes life 100 percent...

the best photograph I ever saw, read n understood n tatz ur 1% in this poem my fren... Fantastic...

Keep it up..

best wishz... karan