Comments : Forever Broken

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow i really loved this poem keep it up
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by xDarkAngelx

    I totally relate to this poem 5/5
    nice job

  • 15 years ago

    by Nawa

    Wow !! that was really nice. You've expressed your feelings in a really nice way, but I think it'll be better if use some imagery and more vivid descriptions it makes the poem stronger.
    Anyway best of luck, keep up the good writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I really liked this :) Don't really know why though:P

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    Nice poem ... Truly felt, honest & sad 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by shantavia

    Dang thats hecks messed up is this a ture poem cause if it is im so sorry that happened to you but um this is a wonderful poem

  • 15 years ago

    by jordan

    Omg. i am so going through this right now. i have this problem not getting over my first boyfriend.