Wooowwwwwww!!! Isn't that awkward!!! :)

Lol I like that poem

Lol I like that poem

Gee, did they really walk in or did you just write this peom outta nowhere?? that must of been wierd for the dad to seethat!! awkward!!

Interesting. Hopefully if some1's parents really did walk in on there kid having sex they wouldn't say that. This is more or less like soft. I think that it would have been better if u described things better. Not that I'm saying that u did a bad job but I think that u could have been more detailed. But the poem was pretty good.

.:Rach:.

Ewwwweeeee! lol... mess, sick he must have
realesed alot of um.. ya know.. =p

it was good it hink you made it funny tp me .
nice.

oh and thank you for that comment on my poem " the poets mind'' i really appreciated it. =]

5/5

I like the ending. nothing happend.

Wat did this really happened to you because i would be really emberrased...lol.. but its really nice i love it