Sad work x

The ending can use a lil bit of work but other wise you hold a strong stand in what you are saying. i know the feeling to that and i hate it so much

If you don't feel human, then you have lost all feeling at all. for we know not what it feels to be an animal, or a demon, or even an angel. so if you feel lost, you just have to wander till you find your way.
Over all this poem was a good story indeed. and it made me stop and think of the words and how I could put this to use on my life. It was a dark poem, and it reflected as a mirror to me, showing dfarkness inside of me. I have to give this poem a 5/5 indeed for it's greatness.
Forgive me for being long winded, but I hope you enjoyed this comment
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The Spirit of the Poetry Knight