Comments : The kiss of the serpent

  • Wow word's can not express how that was great. wow that was awesome. i loved it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Andy

    Amazing poem!
    great use of descriptive words ++ has a great ending!
    6/5 haha :)

  • 15 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    I think this poem is one of the best I've read so far from your writing. It has a wonderful ending, twisting in a sort of evil tone yet once the ending comes you see the humor. Descriptions were beautiful! 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    O wow! this poem is outstanding! I love the ending, it was too ironic. Yet so good, Keep writing!

    [5.5]

    Sarah

  • 15 years ago

    by XxfadingslowlyxX

    This was awesome
    you have a real way to make the reader be able to visualise everythign you were thinking when you wrote this.
    i love it!!
    <3 xox

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow. This was outstanding. Very interesting. Filled with emotions. Extremely amazing vocabulary. Very unique. I'll give it a 5. I truely thought it was amazing! Keep writing. You've got talent! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Awsome poem
    the words choosen, the way you put them together
    really lets the reader just picture it all
    5/5!