Oh My God...this is so graphic and powerful its full of imagery...i could see everything while reading. 5/5....by the way i hope this did not really happen!

Did this really happen to you??

Wow
that just gave me the chills reading it!
its was really really amazing how you can make the reader just have all those images in his head.
I loved it!
nice job 5/5!

Fukers

Did that really happen? man im so sorry. People are so dimented.