This is beautifully written...about the person you wanted to forget, but still see her reflection under the moonlight.. I felt kind of feeling....this poem take place in some quiet city...you are walking there... Seeing her everywhere...This is just what happens after you loose you love to somewhere.. Sad poem... Keep on writing..

Really nice poem and it says about all the true feelings. It is hard to forget the one u loved....
Keep up the good work!!
5/5

God bless u

Heey hassan,,
i like ur poem a lot.. you somehow chose these words so that they sound brilliantly all together.. keep on writing ;) lots of hugs,, tine

Dis poem is so really beutiful it made me relize things wat i done reely
keep ti up huny!
xx hope u reed mines

True feelings come out in this poem. lots of emotion and tragic touch. beautiful poem.!

Hassan
Your pain and lonliness can be felt in your words. Very sad and heartfelt piece.

I tried to hide those blames;
I was fighting with time,
Cold sounds took place on warm wishes.

I loved these lines they really had an impact on me.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

I really do like this poem. I have a few suggestions though:

1. Take out all the unnecessary I's
2. Remove punctuation
3. Remove filler words
4. tweak your grammar just a bit

I have played around with it a bit:

Walking alone the lonely roads
Searching your whispers,
And soft touches of your hands

Missing your sweet smile
Seeing you far from my shadow
Complaining to myself

As darkness chased my way
In the blanket of midnight
It was hard to search my final stay

Tried to hide those blames (this line doesn't make sense)
Fighting with time
Cold sounds took place on warm wishes

Thinking about few hours ago
Reflecting your face under the moonlight
that was the night without you

I hope you are not offended. I like the poem, I just think with a few tweaks, it would read much better.

I can actualy feel it
wow this poemis really amazin

keep it up :)

Wow, that was a very heartfelt poem. I liked it a lot. You wrote it so beautifully.

This was a beautiful and well written poem. i like your writing. 5/5

check out my new poems also. thankss!