Comments : Paper Thin (Maria's Story)

  • 15 years ago

    by Kevin

    Very nice, and set in todays world.
    Kev.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    OMW that was truly amazing and deffinitly described todays life. that happends all the time... the "losers" wanna be the "jocks" and the "jocks" wanna be the " losers". very good poem it was set in a very overwhelming expression!!! keep it up!
    5/5 always
    Kate~LSB