Comments : Feeling Like Insects

  • 15 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Profound and powerful from the beginning to the end. I think that you managed to convey your message excellently through the poem.
    I like the beginning, it is vivid and interesting, filled with greatly described images. The third stanza is my favorite one, I like your descriptions there a lot, also, it is truly deep. The ending stanza is great, too, because it summed up the poem fantastically and it contains an amount of overwhelming emotions and thoughts.

    - (bedtime stories eating children)-
    &&
    -caterpillars crawl beneath your foreheads
    and butterflies flutter in your stomach ...
    ... do they feel?-
    ^^^
    Stunningly brilliant. I love those lines, there is something irresistibly original and powerful about them.

  • 15 years ago

    by Renee

    I liked this is was really good...
    considering the fact that i feel so awkward right now..stupid chorus.. Never sing in high school you get to wear awesomely awfull outfits