Im speechless here in WV!!!

another excellent piece!

hes a fool if he says no!!!!!

Amazing. You always make the reader thristy for more

Amazing
you just can't stop reading till the end!

Excellent poem, i'm adding it to one of my favorites.

You really are good! I'm very impressed! There are times when you lay it out there and there are times when you're so subtle that it makes the reader want to ask for more. The only bad thing is when the poem is over. ( :