Yep know the feeling xx well done xx

This poem is great and well written. I love the whole concept =] Keep writing

I hope this one you wrote not your BF josh , :) becasue it si oen of the favorties ones i read !!

i lvoe it sopecaily teh repetition at teh end

it si very nice

Very, very clever!!!
Love the way you've done this one!!!
nice rhythm, easy to read and understand yet still very stylistic.
Awesome! 5/5