I loved it!
You put a lot of feeling into it and a lot of strong description.
Keep writing!

I liked it.......:)

..ang ganda cous..saya...ahahaha
miszyah..love you.

Brilliant poem!
very well written and explained :)
this is proble my favourite part about your poem
"My heart was pounding..I don't know what to do
It's like my world suddenly stopped revolving"

Amazing :):)

and its not 1/5 or below at all, haha!
5/5 most deffinatly :)

This is a really nice poem, really enjoyed it. Its like a story that keeps keeping you interested. Hey start believing in yourself, your work is great, really loved it. Keep up 5/5

It was actually awesome..
i actually can relate to it since im goin through the same thing..
and don't worry about not bein good or anythin..you'll improve over time. :D
keep up the good work.. :)