First you can go to edit and reinsert the punctuation, it gets messed up when we copy/paste for some reason. I have to do it all the time though I do forget on occasion(often)
An enjoyable read, the metre and rhyme are fine. A couple thoughts...
line 16 : drop the "and" put "a" after "like" and drop the "s" on "ghosts"
Change all the "cos" to commas
last line drop second "I"
As always these are just opinions perhaps good, perhaps not so good.

Thanks for that, it is really helpful as it's the first poem i've put on here and i haven't let anyone read it elsewhere to comment so thanks again

Hi bubbles, this is a heartfelt piece, i like this lots, hope your friends appreciate it? x p

Brill poem!
very descriptive and written from the heart!

A good write :) 4/5