This was really effective, I like the layout and the way it slows down at the end.
Well done, I say a 5/5.

Wow this poem is good i like it

Good insight. sometimes things happen and all we have are nightmares. so you never want to sleep. good work. =)

Sorry about what you have to go thru every night but just stay strong, keep faith and keep writting, 5/5

Good job!
5/5

Really really good poem :)!
very well written + i really like how you described this part of the poem

"staying awake is my only escape"

5/5 deffinately :)!

also i hope your okay!

Dreaming becomes nightmare
and reality is the escape.

loved the images and descriptions. the emotions throughout.
loved it !

5/5

Nice job expressing your feelings with this one

Its a scar for life when these things happen. People are truly monsters to want to do that to a beautifull heart. I hope ur wounds heal in time. Beautifull but tragic write.