Rachel
Great job on this form. Awesome imagery and word choices :)

Grace us with your charm
Place us in your keep
Space is vast and endless
Face your slumber deep

I love the feelings reading this stanza left me with. Peaceful and warm :)

A star won't last forever
Pray and wish you might
Day will come once again
May he be chased by night

Loved your ending I picture the moon chasing the sun :)
Excellent!
Love
Cindy

Rachel,
You never fail when writing your poetry. It always tend to touch the soul of the reader. You have done an excellent job with this form and I envy your ability.

A star won't last forever
Pray and wish you might
Day will come once again
May he be chased by night

^ I can't recall how many times I have wished upon a star for something. Thank God that he knows what I need and that I didn't always get the wishes prayed for.

Day will come once again
May he be chased by night....

A very hopeful message within your words, dear Rachel:)
You did great on this challenge, it was a joy to read your poem.

Hugs,

Ingrid

Rachel with such few words your penned has whispered many words.

A star won't last forever
Pray and wish you might
Day will co ryhmme once again
May he be chased by night
^^^
You create such amazing imagery with this second part ... for some strange reason a nursery rhyme came to mind while reading this part ... (and the cow jumped over the moon) ... yes strange I know but it sparked that inside my mind for some unknown reason.... lol

You have done an excellent job with this form and it was indeed a pleasure to read.

Luanne

Great job on the Lento form! Nice imagery and rhyming. I've read this several times and can take it several ways...guess that's why it's a metaphor! lol....Nicely done!