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Stanza 4 - "Lying"
Stanza 12 - "Adrenaline"

For Stanza's 10 and 11 I think you have put the wrong word at the front of each line cause it doesn't sound right :S if that makes sense. I think they both should be changed to "No"

Overall, the beginning is very strong which leads into a very brilliant poem

Keep it up
5/5
~FountainsOfBlood