Very good keep it up x

Wow i love it!!
:)
once again a great piece of work

This is a work of pure and utter beauty!! Beautifully written and tearjerking.....5/5 for sure!!! Coincidentally, I happen to be the 100th visitor!

Wow, a wonderful poem, I really loved it and it was so touching.
5\5

Lovely poem
i adore it
awsome metaphore :]
5/5