Comments : A Son

  • 15 years ago

    by eehcuhhhz

    I don't understand your ending.

    'Tis for my parents
    That I so yearn

    Is the FOR a mistake?
    If with it, it would've sounded like...
    It's for my parents that I so yearn.
    It doesn't make sense.

    I've always thought of growing up.
    But I've never thought about it from parents perspective.
    I probably will someday.

    Your format's kinda cool.
    It's simple.