Wow this poem is good even if it's not one of your best.=)

Ha yeah it is sorta on the funny side, but in the 4th line "evertime" I think is supposed to be "everytime" Yeah so you might wanna fix that! :) good job 4/5

I like this one.....i can relate very well to this....i like it even if it isnt your best.....

Good poem... Keep writing.

I really like this poem, good job =)

I love this one! It's very funny...keep it up
5/5

Well i have to admit its not one of your best but it was really funny .........cassandra