Well... it's a good style of writing. This makes the poem more interesting. Lots of emotions are there and this one is also very intense. very well written.

I love this poem, raw emotion from the heart...
It was... Beautiful...
5/5

Cheers xo

I really like your opening stanza. You did a good job with the emotion and the rawness of the write, though I was hoping to hear her name at the end lol All in all a nice write.