Very well down, nice flow & rythym; keep up.

Done*

Done*

This is very optimsitic....this is not my choice of a read. But for what you were going for....good job

You need a comma in here.
And you have to lower caps on "l"

Does darkness exist (,) it certainly does
Yet(,) (l)ight always will be and always was

I'm quite biased about this,
For I have my own opinions as well.

I will explain them, of course :]

Darkness has very little or almost no effect
Darkness has a big effect on life.

Other times it seems the darkness just fell

That doesn't make sense.
Darkness always WILL be there.
There will never come a time where darkness doesn't SEEM to be there.
For all over the world, there is darkness.

Your ending.
I LOVE IT!
I was going to contradict it.
But then I thought about it...
"Divine" love.
Real love, or whatever comes close to real love.

I hope I didn't offend you.

This was an okay piece. I felt though, that a lot of this poem was missing something, or perhaps it had too much of something. Sorry I can be more specific.

My favorite stanza was the second one - I liked the tone and the rhymes in this stanza a lot.

Brad

I really enjoyed it i like your rhyme sceam i liked the last line as i was reading it i kept thinking oh this dosnt work but then as i read on it all fit together so perfectly

Wow very well written. you brought up the hope despite the obstacle that every indidual pass through, and on how you try to point out that balance is not merely a word but it really exist..

This is very good as well, and has great emotion. However the rhyming of romance and balance is a little shakey but it works as slant rhyming and doesn't ruin the piece. Also the meter was a little off now and then but it was still a very good piece. 4/5 i enjoyed reading this piece

Darkness....infinite nothingness

lol....it thinks its infinite, thinks it house's all of existence, but little does it know the light has engulfed it. But set inside a thing called TIME, light will engulf it. thus in the ultimate end of a begining. darkness, it simply dont exist.