Comments : Shes just dreaming

  • 11 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    So many girls are put through this : /
    guys just need to open their eyes and they would see how much we care for them!
    5/5 <33

  • 11 years ago

    by withlove

    I think it really sucks how many ppl have to go through this
    i like how you described it
    good job
    4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by damont

    Wonderful poem. i see your problem. its quite sad you have to go through this y don't you say something? umm. the poem you wrote is excellent written and expressed i can feel your sadness it makes someone who doesn't know anything seem to know everything about it. someone who can't relate you force them to see it through your eyes thats what i like about this poem.