I love it!!!
And thanks for the comment on my poem...
Imma go read more of your poems

-Tori

I love this one!!!! :)

Really nice poem its really deep and i know were ur coming from

Wow I've haven't read a good poem 4 a long great job =D 5/5

Great poem! i love the form of it and the flow was fantastic. keep it up :)

I like this poem, it gets straight to how you feel and is rhythmic

Another great poem...and I love it 5/5

I think many of us have been in this situation before and its hard. You wrote this so well expressing strong feelings.
Nice job.

I so could relate to it!!!! beautiful!!! :)
Reminds me of my story...

The last stanza is great!
i think it captures the conflict you face between your heart and the rest of yourself very well
and you make good use of repetition
good job =)
4.5/5

I loved this also. I like how you ended every stanza the same, and the emotions put forth were really strong, nicee!