Love your poem. very good for someone your age. read your profile. very well written.

I like ur poems. 5/5
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You are pure poet! :-) I absolutely loved this. It is so profound, and flows perfectly. I love the rhyme, and the repeated stanza (3)(6). You have great titles, too. I love to find poets whose poems all have great titles. Way to go! :) 5/5