Hi, really well written, very strong words from someone so young, hey girl u had me scared for u. Hope these are just words EH

Dammit. NO.

Though I personally don't like suicidal poems but I appreciate your attempt here. The poem is good. i feel you can write better if you try other concepts. Keep writing.

Very well written.
It had a great flow and held my attention.
I really liked it.
5/5 for sure :)
xx