This was a nice, sweet poem
I think that there is room for improvement in some areas
For one, I dont think you should use exclamation marks when writing poetry
For another, "This is amazing, I think its all a dream.
There is no way this is what it seems!"
Instead of saying "There is no way this is what it seems!"
I think you could have used something else...
But that is just my opinion =P
Other then that this was a good read and I can see some good work coming from you in the future! :)
- Maria xx

Me love it cale you know i do but here i am putting it in writing ......typing....lol 5/5,000000 lol well fine just 5/5 but it was great and i loved every word.

you are a great writer.

laura

This is a very sweet poem. As Maria said, I do think there is room for you to improve. I think some of your lines are way to wordy and you should go though and make sure everything flows easily. But other than that it was great.

I love it its really beautifull

Awwww
5/5
its so sweet
:]
i loved it
it reminded me of my bf :]

Amazing work
it is a great piece,you have a great talent
keep it up!
God bless:)
Lisa