Amazing poem and an interesting interpretation. Your choice of words really helps in the imagery within this poem - if one can say that.

"Foolhardiness will bring them misfortune;
For their acts goes against regulation.
Although it is a modern way to feel,
Creators scorn upon their temptation."

^^ My favourite stanza from the entire poem. It just brings across this poem so nicley and adds this touch of beauty to the entire compostition.

Excellent work. 5/5

Truly interesting piece, you pulled me in with the first stanza and kept my attention through the whole poem with vivid descriptions.

I read all your interpretation of the "Loveless" and this is not my favorite one but I still liked it. There are a lot of emotions that flow through every stanza which is great and memorable. Also, you managed to create very good rhythm through the piece along with captivating flow.

The only thing I don't like is the ending line (but that is just my opinion). I think that this piece needs more powerful ending, a memorable statement to represent the conclusion of the story within a poem.

Overall, truly well written piece.

I loved this one it is so beautiful great job well written

Although I am not familiar with 'Loveless' this piece stands alone.

You have painted a charming piece about a one off night of passion spent, but at the same time you managed to retain some mystery too!

Michael

Nice poem, greatly written and very expressive. Like you choice of words and they way you play around with them to generate a good piece. Nice vocabulary too. Keep up