Leave it, thats my opinion, i think it's great how it is

I love it... its like feeling free like being free run until you cant run anymore..i love it please dont change it.. i luv u

Shareeda

I love it. leave it. amazing job. the poem is just filled with emotion, power and meaning. absolutely beautifully written.
--lovedroughtmelody

I think this is an awesome poem. You should leave it like it is. Although adding more could make it better. And in my point of view i feel suspense at the end?? Great poem