So simple and sweet just like you intended. I love the rhyming in this poem, it reenforces the whole sweet and simple type thing you were aiming for. I love the simplistic and almost childlike expression of your love for him (the thousand mouths and arms..). Anyway.. I really can’t find anything wrong with it as far as grammar and everything else goes.. Great job. 5/5

If I had ten thousand mouths, I'd
Kiss you with every single one
And if I had ten thousand arms, I'd
Hug you and start over when I got done
--so so cute
this poem is wonderful from start to finish,
5/5

I really like the second verse, I thought it was quite 'cute'. I agree with you, it is short and sweet. Keep writing, I want more! :D

I love this poem. It flows very well and wow I adore it! Keep em' coming!

Hehehe.. i liked it.. nice.. cute and sweet..

Cute! 5/5
I'm going to share this with my best friend who will share it with her boyfriend ;)

Too many I's and forced rhyming. Doesn't flow well either. The intended message was sweet though.....

I like it! It was short but it really did get the point across!!! Good job!

WOW I LOVED your last to Stanzas, the lines

If I had ten thousand mouths, I'd
Kiss you with every single one
And if I had ten thousand arms, I'd
Hug you and start over when I got done.

They were great and original and the imagery was wonderful. 5/5

So unbelieveably cute!
loveddddd it!!!

keep smiling:)