And we all know memories fade with the scars
-makes cutting sound so tempting
5/5

Last comment wasnt good,sorry
Dangle salvation in front of noses
just out of reach, too much like the stars...
--fav. part
this poem had good imagery

OMG!!!!
I loved this poem soooooo much.
It was amazing. You're truly a wonderful poet
You are so talented.
Please check out some of my latest work
10/5
ps. I hope u dont mind but I'm submitting this to the weekly poetry contest. =]

This was a beautiful piece of poetry combining a type of despiration and a strive to see the things happening, the things that sometimes you can't see with your eyes.
5/5 and nomination. Good luck!

Good job!